Operation: PGR Fandub Project
janoah for Commandant
The player character and leader of the Gray Raven squad. Graduated at the top of their class at FOS, they are one of the best commandants around for Babylonia. They are very supportive and caring towards their squadmates.
Because this is a player character, I’m open to male and female voices.
- english
- male adult
- female adult
- androgynous
- female teen
- male teen
(informative, slightly urgent) The Corrupted are still gathering this way…
(warm, sincere) I genuinely care about what you’re thinking. I don’t need a reason for that.
(authoritative) Gray Ravens, move out!
It's nice to hear your retakes for your Commandant and to hear it more played in your natural voice while playing around a bit with how to change the sound of your voice. That's really good practice and I can definitely see more of that difference with the final line for Commandant. Again, you do a good job with the more serious lines/lines that require a little more power for an authoritative figure.
I appreciate more of your casual approach to the second line with some of the takes actually as that makes it seem more like a friendly conversation between Commandant and the person Commandant is talking to in this scene. There's still a hint of awkwardness in these lines, but I do like it. Another thing I noticed was misreading of the second line. Be mindful towards the lines and review over the recording to ensure you've got the lines down. Nothing wrong with practicing beforehand until the lines run smoothly for you before hitting the record!
I will say though: if you're interested at all, I'd be interested in hearing your take for Lee as well (your takes for the second line made me think about it), but no problem if not! Thank you again for submitting a retake in your lines and for your time. I hope we can work together soon!
Of course, the more auditions for characters the better practice! I also thank you for the feedback once more. I'm not trying to make a excuse for my fault, but as for the second line with the misread, I never really realized that during recording, and Just know I listened to it back and realized what you're talking about, so apologies on my end! Seriously though, I'm thankful for the feedback, and I'll be sure to try my best to practice more and more before hand haha!As for the Lee take, I'll do that right now, just to get it out the way and of course, good morning, good afternoon, and goodnight! hope all is well. Best regards.