Oblivion Override full game Dub Part II
Zeph for Brady
Tough Boxing Champion Robot, that nowadays supplies Crimson with Power Stations. He is a Big Fan of what you are trying to accomplish and Fanboys quite alot. That being Said, He is still in Business Relations with Mr.Xie so he isnt exclusively your best Pal, If you cant pay.
A little Bit proud, and a little Bit cocky, but Not too much. Mostly seems to genuinely root for Crimsons success.
[Kind of hyped Up] You're the Talk of the Town Here!
[slightly Defensive] Well, I was Just asking. The Rumors are getting crazy, you know?
[Admiring] Anyway, I'm Just saying: i admire courageous people like you!
I honestly absolutely love the delivery, love your Adlibs, they feel very natural. So top notch.However hate the way your Microphone sounds. xD I can't pinpoint what it is exactly thats causing the Issues here, but Reverb is a big part of it. Try to treat your recording space with some more absorbing, cloth surfaces because it currently sounds VERY bouncy, like you record in a concrete basement. Try to bring that under control and tell your Noisegate that it shouldn't eat too much of your lower volume spaces and its honestly a GREAT submission. Also, for some cleaning up, I'd highly recommend taking out all the mouse clicking, Keyboard strokes and other sidenoises to make it sound smoother. Also you can absolutely push your takes together more! :)Get all of that in habit and you have some HIGH potential dude. Honestly loved that.