I really liked the change in tones for the product reveals! It added a great moment of humor and grabbed my attention! Keep in mind the prompt of speaking in a large area without a microphone. Your pacing was great for something closer to a radio or tv ad, but when you speak in a large room you will want to slow down a bit and project. Try thinking of how your voice would sound bouncing off of the walls in a large gymnasium. If you speak too fast then it might get muddled with the other words you’re saying. You can practice projecting by making sure you have a nice solid breath behind each of your words by engaging your diaphragm and taking a deep breath before you speak. Doing breathing exercises will also help! Overall, you did a great job and just keep practicing!