Hello! Thank you so much for your interest in the project. I appreciated hearing both your takes for Commandant and Lee. You have a very strong voice between both your Commandant and Lee! It's clear your voice would be well fit for a leader or someone with that sense of power. I especially liked that for the first take for Lee's first line, you went ahead and added the "Yes, yes you did". It really made me feel like you're right about to criticize your audience or at least give them a good lecture, which is very much a Lee thing to do.

A few things I wanted to note: I feel like the second line -- the warmth line-- for Commandant was a bit lacking in the warmth. I do appreciate that you went for a quieter voice for these lines because doing that actually offers a more intimate scene, but for warmer, I would recommend imagining you're trying to comfort a friend or smiling while saying the line because facial expressions can actually affect the way you perform as well. Even pretending you're reaching out, patting someone on the back -- something like that can help a bit more with lifting up your performance. Likewise, if you add in little things like a small chuckle or a sigh (being more general), it gives your performance a little more spice and makes your auditions stand out more.

Regarding your Lee, I felt that it was a little too calm for the directions given and it began to fall into a little more monotone. One trick I have for this is stressing different words, switching up your pitches at times, and again, back to moving your body and matching facial expressions to the directions or scene to really sell the performance.

If you're interested at all, I would love to see your take on Nikola as well as a reaudition with all things that I have written in mind. Otherwise, thank you so much for your time and I hope to work with you soon.