I can hear Zim from Invader Zim yelling this lol. I really like this.

I love your voice for this! It has a lot of personality.

I love this! As KlassicmanVA said, I can hear the Invader Zim style voice! Can't wait to hear more : )

Nice job projecting your voice! I know you can project even more, so continue practicing and really push out your air and voice across the room. A big thing I can hear is you running out of breath, so remember to take big, deep breaths so that you can push through a bit before needing another breath versus taking small ones in between which can disrupt the flow and performance. You also stick within a similar pattern throughout so I want you to think about the scene and who you’re speaking to and what you can bring to the table to stand out. Good job!