Oblivion Override full game Dub Part II
Cap for Mr.Bond
Mr. bond is a bulky Bouncer, that has a rather minor role but quite a few lines in this Part. He is quite the imposing Figure and Professional Security Robot, so Not very smart. All we know is that He is competent, usually upbeat, but can't stand creepy Horror things.
[greeting, Upbeat]Yo-Yo, Morning, Sir!
[Creeped Out, nearly Shaking] Good Lord! Scared the Scrap outta me! I mean, what the hell happened?!
[Pleading] What do you say??
I can honestly see your Voice work for him, tho I would definitely try to intensify the shudder in the second line. Consider that he is a security guy for a living so he shouldnt be too much of a pansy. There should be more disbelief and slight disgust (cause thats always a sideeffect of intense fear) in it. Other than that, this definitely has potential. :D
Thank you for your audition!
Oh and PS: Recording stuff in AABBCC will help with the Distinction between the takes and note the clear Difference, rather than recording in ABCABC. :)
Oh and also, adding a comment to your Audition rather than Auditioning twice does look a little better when you forgot to add some Info. :D
Thank you sm for the feedback!!! I'll make sure to do that next time, I'm just learning all this stuff so i appreciate the help. Thank you for the words of encouragement
Would you like me to redo the audition with these new tips and delete my other 2?
Sorry for the late Answer. :D
Feel free to do so, of course but no need to delete the others.