New World Adventures
theultimateparadoxs for Narrator
THIS IS NO LONGER A PAID ROLE!!! Due to the large volume of submissions I have received, only auditions that have EXPLICITLY stated willingness to work for free, either in the comments or in a direct message to me will be considered for the role. (If you have already messaged me, adding a comment to your audition reminding me of such will not hurt. If your audition already has a comment saying you will work for free, please do not message me just to tell me the same thing.)
IN MY HEAD: This section was deliberately left blank. I don't recommend putting on a voice unless you are willing to keep that voice on all day.
Alek was sitting on his bed cleaning his sword, the ragged cloth gliding silently over a blade polished to perfection. (Calm)
An elbow to the gut and Gwenevere broke free. She ran until she saw the ground ahead catch fire. (Frantic)
"silently" not "slightly"
Sorry about that! My mind does that sometimes, lol. I can try it again but what do you think of the tone?
Although you got the emotion right, which is one of the more important things, your audio quality is holding you back. I can hear your breath on the mic, and you've adjusted it too sensitive, so it maxes out whenever you talk too loudly. Even with all that corrected, you'd be hard pressed to compete with the other narrators who have performed amazingly well, but might I suggest auditioning for Nebin? Don't worry about the "IN MY HEAD" bit. Show me how YOU think he should sound.
I understand. I don't have a filter, so I'm struggling to avoid my breathe getting through. Thanks for the advise! I'll definitely audition for Nebin!
Don't worry about the filter. Put the mic 60 degrees to the side so it's pointing at your cheek. It won't pick up your breath so much, but it will still get your voice.