I liked the energy at the end talking about the free gift.

You did a good job with the read, but your voice came across a bit quiet. For a gymnasium scenario, you need to project much more to ensure that your voice carries across the space. Take a deep breath and engage your diaphragm to push out your voice with more force. This will help you achieve the volume needed without straining your voice.

Additionally, focus on articulating each word clearly. Since your audience might not have the text in front of them, they’re relying on you to ensure that every word is distinct and understandable. Avoid letting words blend together, which can make it harder for listeners to follow. Keep practicing, and your projection and clarity will improve. Great effort overall!