Heeey, this was ALOT better! Very sorry for the late reply. I am actually really happy about this trend as of late that so many people re-Audition with my feedback in mind and give a significantly better performance! :D Loving it! Especially the "raw" emotion part really improved. You are almost a little too slow here, but that is mostly understandable as its hard to nail something you dont actually have knowledge about / visual context for. Other than that, the only criticism I can give you here is really 1. You recorded the Audio a little too quiet, which will make it hard to post prod something because too loud and too quiet are both kinda annoying to deal with. Sitting between -12 and -18 db is usually a really good value! :) And 2. you left an endless amount of space between the takes haha. Thats really not necessary. Leaving like a second or two is plenty space. :) Thank you very much for re auditoning! There is definitely potential here!