Heya hey and thank you so much for your Audition!I think one thing that really held you back here was that your pacing felt off. The Battleweary here really comes especially in with the Pacing, where everything you say and everything you do is just a burden at this point, but you also don't see any other Place for you in the World so you just continue onward. This weight upon your Shoulders really slows your whole mindset down, including your tempo of speech and also the tone. Imagine that everything you do is a drag. Its literally the trope that you forgot what you even fight for, or why you started to begin with and just go over your day without the fire you once had. Now all you see is work. And while I appreciate the "Get out of my Sight", being almost bored, this is where all your Frustration about your Life actually being incredibly annoying should unload onto your Battlecry.Does that make sense? I hope so. Either way, thank you very much for your Audition!