Thanks alot for Auditioning!Your overall tone is actually not all that bad but you still seem to struggle with getting into the headspace rather than "thinking" of the Headspace, you know? When you grit the lines through your teeth its not really "there" yet, as it does not really sound angry or aggrevated. Try to rely less on "artificially" making it sound angry, and try to get a feeling for the Emotion behind it first. The signed up in pieces line, should be slightly monotone with a bit of a threat, more grumbling to yourself, as you plan your Vengeance already in your head. While I think you got a good understanding of the tone per se, its misssing plenty of the oomph. :)But anyway, thanks again and best of luck! ^^