Worthy of Protection [Sims 2 VO Series]
simtationproductions for Akilah "Aki" Amara
[calm] Tomorrow morning [beat] [panicked] OH GOD, TOMORROW MORNING! WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO? WHAT ARE WE GOING TO TAKE! TALIAH, COME HERE HELP ME PACK! Wait, NO DON’T GET UP STAY THERE I’LL DO IT ALL DON’T WORRY ABOUT IT!
[honest, heartfelt, without thinking] Nothing really helps that feeling. It never seems to go away, does it? But distractions are everything. If you’re distracted from the pain...from the emptiness, then I think it makes it better.
[scoffs] Am I hungry? Ha! I’m always hungry! I’ll eat when I’m not hungry! I’ll devour the world!!
You've got the right tone for Aki, spot on in fact. Your emotion is really good as well, though it could use being a bit smoother. Like for the first line it sounds kind of like your reading the lines (not too much but kind of) so the excitement and panic in your voice doesn't land quite as well. The second line is well done! Great job, the only thing I could say is make it a bit disheartened. Third line hilarious. Great, funny, perfect inflection. Great work!
Thank you for all the feedback! I will work on making my delivery smoother!