Hey! I realise this song and voice may be a little more childish than you're going for. Is so, please let me know. I'd be happy to send in another take showing a more mature voice. Thanks!
Definitely try to do a more mature voice, yeah. Thank you! -RecD
Alright, I'll get right on that! Would you like a resubmission of both lines and singing?
I'm resubmitted a new one which a lower, more motherly voice. Thanks!