Worthy of Protection [Sims 2 VO Series]
madderrose for Taliah Amara
[agitated] There is no “possibility”, Aki! And why should we just uproot our lives again for these people?! Anyways, where was Nova in our time of need, huh?! No! [she takes a breath and calms herself] We are safe here. We should not do what that woman wants. Who cares about what the job is. What could she possibly need from us?
[sighs, relenting] Fine...you know I can get up and do things on my own, you don’t have to try and pamper me just because I’ve got some issues.
[panting, struggling to speak] Oh….oh god, whew….that was...that was something. I don’t know why...I ever...expect to just go out for coffee….when I’m with you. Is this some kind of….intervention for me….to exercise? Because as the elder of the household….disagree!
This is good! I like the amount of emotion you put forward for the first line, it really sounds like you feel strongly about what you're saying. I would say that the inflection on some of the words are a bit strange, but really did like the emotion. Second line was very Taliah, just monotone enough with just enough about of emotion, I like what you did with it! The third line was good as well, I liked that you actually went for panting and sounding exhausted the only thing I could say is that I'd like it to be a bit more labored but honestly, you did fine. Again, I'd like to say that you should work on sounding a bit more natural so the emotion really hits home. You've got great energy and emotional delivery but the lines just need to be smoothed out a bit. Good work!
haha thanks for the advices, I will do my best and apply your corrections next time, and yeah I also noticed some words sounded a bit strange, and my voice too actually since I had a cold that day would you like me to re audition with the corrections?
Aw! I hope you're feeling much better. Don't rush or push yourself or anything, plenty of time! :) And yeah, you're welcome to reaudition whenever you're up for it with any changes you'd like to apply.