Star Wars: Empire
Neiroe for Brad Pota
Major Brad Pota is Commander Fior's executive officer. He's a loyal second in command and a close friend, but they have their disagreements behind closed doors. Unlike Fior, Pota recognizes the evil in the Empire, despite the fact that he views the Rebellion as only making things worse. He's a compassionate leader and person, but he's an Imperial officer at his core.
- english
- radio drama
- television
- male young adult
- general
- audacity
(After Fior tells him about TK-Trooper Training) Wow, that sounds amazing compared to the Cadet Program. I got trained by some fat Captain who got reassigned to us as a punishment. He probably couldn’t have done our training courses even if he wanted to by the judge of him.
(Holding back Fior) Naton, stop! We need him alive! Listen to me!
Alright, I’m in command now! Sweep the buildings, Troopers; move it! You three, detain the Jedi and, agh, make sure the Commander didn’t kill him.
I like what you did, but man do you have to boost that audio. I downloaded it to put it into audacity, boosted it as far as audacity would let me (though I can boost it further with another application), and it was still a bit quiet. Again, on the acting front, you did a nice job; I'm just giving you some constructive criticism regarding recording/editing. Just listen to your recordings without headphones (Headphone volume can trick you about how loud/quiet it actually is. It's happened to me as an actor.) and make sure to adjust it in editing if it sounds quiet for whatever reason. Again, nice job.
Thank you. I'm still trying to find my balance with the audio, hopefully I'll have it sorted out sooner than later.