Awesome work. There is only a few things that would concern me and that's if you can keep this energy you have and slightly add your own flair to the work. I would love for you to try once more with three things in mind, 1. Take your time, 2. Set your pace for the pronunciation, 3. Go off the books do what you think would be best for your work. Other than that this audition was damn near perfect great job-JJ