Chervona Fantasy
Jeremiah Cole for Darion
Concept
A patriotic son of Arkadia that will do what must be done.
Bio
Darion, embodying the essence of Arkadian politicking, possesses the keen observational skills and strategic judgement characteristic of the Echery. While not a witch hunter or inquisitor, he adeptly navigates the intricate webs of power and intrigue, always poised and vigilant. Intelligent and discerning, Darion isn't one for brute force and is in favor of diplomatic finesse, preferring alliances and to seek peaceful resolutions to conflicts. Engaging in scholarly pursuits and cultural endeavors in his daily life, he also seamlessly transitions into the realm of high society events.
- male young adult
“Do I need a good excuse to see my dear cousin?” (sincerely)
“We want to know for sure. This country can’t handle another crisis, not now.”
"So Luvinia sends the household dog." (vexed)
Hello! You've captured the character's concept but there are some things that you can improve on. Firstly, you cadence is quicker in the first two lines than you probably realize. Remember that you need to sound nice and smooth for the audience. We can hear that you've caught the emotion of the character, but because your pace, it makes the character seem very excited to say the first two lines and you lose the mood. Lastly, there seems to be a lot of reverb and echo coming back into your mic. A simple solution would be to just throw a blanket of yourself, the screen, and the mic while you record. It stops sounds from bouncing around the walls and back into your mic and dulls any sound coming out of the blanket.