Film Noir Audio Game: Montana Clark's Audio Adventures Episode ONE
firestar1st for Lady In Red
Age: 20's-30's
A mysterious and beautiful woman that crashes the party. A seductress with an unknown connection to any of the other party-goers, she arrives to request Monty's aid. She seems to know quite a bit about Monty, all the while revealing very little about herself. Medium to low range voice. Her voice is sultry, just oozing with sexiness. Think of Lust from Full Metal Alchemist.
"You haven't met me, no.. but I'm definitely familiar with you. I know who you are, what you do, and what you've done. I'm actually hoping you can help me out with something..."
"Mr. Clark, I am very wealthy, and very desperate. I'm sure we can ...work something out."
[Laughing]
"Oh no, Mr. Clark... I'm not going anywhere. If you're going to make a lady wait, I'll spend my time watching you in action."
Hey there, nice audition! You have good energy in your voice, but I think you should try to tone down the overly sexual nature of your read. It comes across as a bit forced, and I think you'd have an easier time if you portrayed her 'sexiness' as more of a confident and playful flirtation. Feel free to submit another audition, if you'd like!