Film Noir Audio Game: Montana Clark's Audio Adventures Episode ONE
75vrmn for Montana "Monty" Clark
Age: Late 20's-early 30's.
An easily bored detective, too brilliant for his own good. He's prone to annoying the suspects he interrogates because of his sarcastic tone and insufferable references to pop culture.
Even in casual conversations, he's more concerned with figuring you out than he is being polite.Medium to deeper range. He switches from inner monologue to actual dialogue frequently.
Inner Monologue:
Not 20 minutes ago, Juliette Henderson greeted me at the front door... She seemed happy, she seemed kind, she seemed pleasant... but most importantly...she seemed ALIVE.
Inner Monologue:
I approach the beautiful lady in red. Red, the color of fire, of seduction, of blood and fear...
She's been eyeing me, following my movements. Sipping on her drink and pretending she's preoccupied.
She looks up at me with a knowing smile.
"Actually it's Transylvanian. I'm named after Dracul Montana, feared general of the Lycan rebellions."
Inner Monologue:
He didn't react. Not even a smile. Maybe it was my delivery.
Thanks for auditioning! You've got a great gruff quality to your voice! That said, we're looking for a bit more optimism in tone. Monty's pretty sarcastic, and in the third line, he's delivering a joke, which doesn't read all that clearly in your take. I love your pauses inbetween beats, you do a good job getting that film-noir quality in the monologues!