Loved the zombie noises lol. The start seemed a little stutter-y, but when you got into the groove you seemed to nail it!

Great job on the pronunciation of "PTD" – that was a strong point in your read! However, remember that pronunciation is just one aspect of a script. While it's essential, don't forget to inject some enthusiasm into your delivery. When you're advertising something, think about how excited a salesperson would be. Let that excitement come through in your voice; it's contagious! Excitement doesn't necessarily mean speaking rapidly, though. Think about how you'd talk to a friend when you're telling them about a fantastic new game or movie you've experienced. You want to share your enthusiasm and make them feel as excited as you are. So, let that energy shine through in your read. Another aspect to consider is the tempo of your read. It seemed a bit consistent throughout. Remember, a consistent tempo can make the read sound a bit robotic. Think about your everyday conversations – you vary your pacing, sometimes you speed up, other times you slow down, and you might even pause or hesitate. Try to bring some of that natural conversational flow into your voice acting. By the way, your zombie noise was great! It's fantastic to see you pushing yourself outside of your comfort zone. Remember, the more you experiment and step out of your comfort zone, the more you'll grow as a voice actor. Keep up the good work!