I liked what you did for the 3rd line -- for the first two lines, could you say the first line with more forcefulness and much faster, and the 2nd line a bit less ominously, more like giving someone advice? Let me know if you need me to dismiss this aud to resubmit!
Voice Actor
An intimidating young man who is the reincarnation of the monster Raven, a frightening giant bird who terrorized the town not long ago. He is intense and full of spite for humanity, but hidden within his dark ambitions is a gentle, brave heart that was once corrupted beyond repair long ago due to his own kindness. At one point in the story, he has a bout of amnesia, where he forgets not only his memories, but his bitterness, too.
Voice: Medium-low adolescent male
Note: He has 12 lines total for the role, 3 of which are the audition lines.
(ominously, commandingly) "All shall rue the day I bring them all together. That is the day I will regain what is rightfully mine. Now, return to me the shard!"
(during his bout of amnesia; a grim but sincere piece of advice) "One day, you'll have to learn that if you don't fight for what you want, you'll be powerless to have it taken from you."
(when someone he deeply cares about tries one last time to stop him from doing something terrible to himself and everyone else; with despairing resolve) "My true self is a being of darkness who only brings harm to everyone. Without that, I am nothing."
