LOVE your slate - so fun and just right! thank you so much for going the extra mile. love that you will go above and beyond. I love the little adds you did - sfx, reax, laughs etc. My favorite part. thanks for having some fun with it. Glad you edited the characters separately because if you had them side by side they would sound a bit too similar, so this helped to avoid that - so that was good. there are some really nice moments in here. I would want to work a bit more on character development to make sure they sounded completely different and had unique characteristics from one another - that would be my main focus. Individually they had some good moments that I would want to direct and play with - great to see your efforts. Good base to work with here. The one that is seamed together - is as I predicted - having them side by side (while i can hear what you are trying to do to differentiate them) they are just too similar in your own voice range. But loved all these efforts and reax you put in there - keep it up