Attack on Rapture Part 2
crystallisvox for Annie Leonheardt
Annie Leonhart is the commander of the three main rebel leaders leading the revolution in Columbia. Her cold, aggressive, commanding attitude struck fear into the hearts of those ruling Columbia. This attitude of hers allowed her to inspire follow those who wanted change... Even at the cost of bloodshed. She is one of many key figures that had helped with the oppressed in Columbia. However, as the story continues, there are hints to her character that make her something else than just a revolutionary hero. She has connections with something or someone that stretches on even further.... And apparently... Her mysterious connections are something to be feared. (For Bioshock fans, she's Daisy with a twist)
Annie is a powerful speaker and grade A tactician to boot, despite her youthful age. However, her voice is cold and somewhat stoic, like Mikasa, but does have somewhat of a commanding presence when giving a speech to hide her dark side. She also has a bit of a dark humor to her when chewing out others. This dark humor and attitude of hers gives her a rather foul mouth.
"(Intimidating) I hope that was a joke, 'Muffintop' because if there's anything that you're afraid of, it's the hell that I'm gonna unleash on your pretty pony-boy face if you don't know how to use that cocksucking mouth of yours for something that could help us out here."
(Inner Monologuing) "[sigh] This is great...Just fucking great... We're running out of time to get off this floating hellhole... The big boys aren't going to be happy about this, especially HIM. We need those two to trust us... Then, it'll lead us to her brother... After that... Maybe this hell we raised can finally come to an end... And I can go find my daddy again..."
(Giving a speech to her army) "[shouting] Alright! Listen up, Cocksuckers!! I'm gonna say this once and I ain't gonna repeat myself, because you decided to jerk off to my voice like the sorry, horny, shits over at Fink's!! We got a plan to punch those freaks right where it hurts! We take hold of the south side's weapons storage and the east side's vigor stoarge! When we hahve those, this fight will be ours!! Now!! Raise the revolution and give'em no mercy!!"
*generic things, laughing, grunting, crying, yelling etc*
A little bit more emotion and you should yell on Line 3. Line 1 and 2 were delivered excellently and your mic quality is great! thank you for auditioning!
Also, the last line was a little bit of trouble, but I can understand the length and words chosen were problematic.
Ah, totally agree. A lot of times that whole "cold, aggressive, lone wolf" people have for Annie can be taken too literally, at least for me. And I had completely forgot to record the yelling, etc. until after I submitted. Anyway, thanks for the feedback! c:
Your Annie audition was great! I share the problem, so I realize that it's not always noticeable, but enunciate your words a bit more. There are parts where words were slurred together, but again, other than that, it was fantastic!
Thanks!! It's definitely something that can always be improved, and I think I might've been literally rushing to leave somewhere at the time. Thanks for your feedback!