Hey Cory - thank you so much for saying hi by the way - Nice organic opening. I would have done the second sentence a little less frantic than the opening but you did some change ups. You were almost really fast in moments but I really appreciated how let go you were so it wasn't all throughout which is great. Loved when you said, Why Cause you're scared. You create a real scene and you react. I would want to direct this a bit in the opening so it has just a bit more dynamics in there but you really are emotional and not afraid to bare all and you gave me journey throughout - so great job - loved that emotion at the end too - you've got teh right idea here. Would love to direct this to show you what we could also do with it -but you made some good choices here.