Thank you for auditioning! I think you followed the direction well, and your voice is also appropriate for this character. I don't have much to add! - For combat lines like "This'll end it", you can try slightly more variation in your inflection, such as a slight emphasis on a different word like "end" instead or a slight raise in pitch. With just subtle additions, it can help make it sound more conclusive and give it more impact. Perhaps how restrictive this character's direction is may have influenced your read, so it's all about finding the right balance!