Hey Sketchofmind? thanks so much for your note. Glad you are happy with it. Love it when we can be proud of ourselves. I love your voice and your personality - and love the interupt when he asks her not to go, but for me this is all one speed (except that part and one more) but love when he nervously laughs and his voice cracks. what you need though are more dynamics (changes in volume, speed, emotion etc) but nice base here for sure. Looking forward to hearing you in other things but you can afford to slow down over all. it will likely feel too slow for you but we will play with different speeds to create emotion and growth in the story. It will be a great tool to add to your toolbox