Hey Mika - thanks so much for having some fun with your slate - lots of personality and you sound like you're having a good time. But I also hear you questioning yourself if you're doing it right - so just trust you are and have some fun. First script - is good - very cartoony though - but good for a cartoon section. More dynamics will be a great add to this - but some nice variations in there still. It blended in with fear so becareful with that. Again while this has a bit more natural in it for me - it still feels cartoony - so working with more film like deliveries is what I recommend so you don't default to cartoony ONLY. you need to show range that way. Some great choices in disgust -but again hard to tell when you are switching from Anger, to fear to disgust. Perhaps you chose to have ONE character feeling this throughout? Which is a great choice but I wasn't sure -so therefore it either needs to be more obvious or get more differentiation between your characters. Some nice choices in here though - so good job having some fun with these