Thanks! 1: Great ideas, and a way to help get excited/interested. This is super fun and playful. Only slight clarity compromise, to be expected with so much energy/emotions in this. Love the enthusiasm. Great life sounds and varied expression. GREAT ending. Super. 2: nice serious contrast. Strong pace and clarity, a little detached for me, like it's a rehearsal all alone, not talking TO someone. Interesting ending tho, some subtext/secret going on that intrigues. Well done.