Hana Thorns - Skyrim Follower and Quest mod
one angry beaver for Manedaen Silinaine
These are actually all of his lines. ^^' His appearance is limited as an unlucky villain/victim.
He and his subordinates arrive at a location in the planned path of a scouting party that failed to report, only to find them slaughtered at the feet of the player. It was not a good day for Manedaen.
There is plenty of freedom for his tone, the keywords here are excentric or histerical, or both. A unique tone of voice, maybe haughty befitting a Thalmor, would suffice.
(shocked, disgusted) Just what happened and who ARE you! Did you do this!?
(outraged) Are you mad!? After murdering an entire scouting party that's your best excuse? You are all under arrest!
(from conflicted to enraged or histerical) No! NO! My cousin was one of them, you're not going to jail... no, you're dead! DEAD!
(enraged) For Faniiel, Raaargh!
Needs more energy! And volume, though noise seems like it could be a bigger factor then. If I were to guess I'd say your default speaking voice is calm and quiet, like mine. Experiment with emoting out of your comfort zone.
Alright, I'll see what I can do, thanks for the feed back.