Hi there! Your voice really portrays what I'm looking for! So, regarding your request for my thoughts and feedback, I'll just state one thing before I begin: I'm not a professional at this so I hope that my words won't hurt you in any form and way. It also means that I'm not necessarily correct. So, honestly, I think that the first line is okay, but for your second line, you should've hurried to say, "It's okay." This is because Carl Wayne is "interrupting," and usually when a person interrupts someone, they would talk a little faster than one would usually talk, hinting that they wanted some attention. Lastly, for the last line, at "But in the beginning, [tears fall] I couldn't take it, I believed you had killed Lea," I would pause at certain places to make it seem more believable that a senior was said. It's like when you recall something, you would usually pause to think about it. But that's my advice, thoughts, and feedback. You don't have to listen to it, it's just me rambling about some things I thought could have been better, but overall, I liked your audition! Keep it going!