A Messy Selection
Gethin Hughes for Narrator
The narrator must have a clear voice that tells the story in a way that follows the story.
- english
[The COACHMAN speeds the carriage up, and the horses run faster than ever. Inside the carriage, ELK AOKI and ELM AOKI hold onto each other tightly.]
[Silence overwhelms the running carriage as the COACHMAN is cut off. Fear spreads to the twin boys.]
[One of the carriage wheels falls off. ELK AOKI rushes to hug his brother to protect him, but he bumps his head on the side of the carriage and blacks out. ELM AOKI stares at his fallen brother and anxiety builds up. He raises his head and sees a shadow covering the window and yells before he faints out of fear.]
Very nice! Also, just so you know, Aoki is a Japanese last name and it's to emphasize that they're foreigners. Aoki is pronounced Ao-Ki, not Al-Ki.
That's my accent merging the vowels - I am familiar with Japanese pronunciation, though it often doesn't come naturally in British accents. That said, if cast I'll make note to emphasize the pronunciation.
Yep, I get it. I kind of had that idea, but it's just a reminder. It happens to me too.