Solid job! You pronounced your "T" sounds in the beginning, which is one of the main things I watch out for when reviewing this script in particular. I would recommend projecting more; sometimes I felt like there was too much whispering happening. I do like the way you use this softer tone, there is some solid emotional work happening here, but try mixing it up a bit more, add in some extra emphasis/other emotional beats for certain words, and focus on keeping the read engaging by doing so. Also, your words occasionally felt like there was some hesitation present, show some more confidence when some of these trickier words! Overall, the read was very sweet and simple, it accomplished the job well. Keep at it! ~Joe