Really nice clear slate - don't feel that you need to slate WHAT you are doing when it's obvious. Perhaps you might slate between reads or characters (angry) -( Fear) etc but the slate is all about a second character - treat it that way. Good job on anger - you have a really nice solid base and will do well in this field. I felt fear was decent but it didn't go anywhere. I like when it gets quieter - I think that's a great choice but I would just add more layers of fear to this - like some faster moment for a second, but loved your ending here - nice and organic. That is what I love about you - you are organic - great word to use in your branding etc. Love that you care about what you are reading. You are present and all you need is a bit of direction - loved your ending there as well - good job giving me a change up Great base to work with here -good work