P4GR: The Social Links
Kenta for Tetsuma Tsuge
Another one I doubt you would recognize. Tetsuma Tsuge is a former researcher for the Kirijo Group who is a close contact of Naoto Shirogane's grandfather. He comes to Inaba per Naoto's request as she becomes aware of the existence of Personas and Shadows and seeks for an expert on the subject.
Have fun with this one, another wise old man time, but more of an intellectual type.
"Agh- Well... You ARE correct in that assessment, however...!"
"Ah, so YOU are Yu Narukami, yes? Young Naoto has told me quite a bit about you. Worry not, I am aware of your circumstances. I have not informed Detective Dojima of your... escapades."
"You... Could you please elaborate on what you said you were made of... er... Teddie, was it...?"
Hey! I love the take and the accent does pretty well for the role! I was just wanting to say I wanted to hear you get a little more proactive with the lines. I wanna hear some of your emotions through the lines.
In the first line, he's on the backpedal. He's lost his hold on the conversation and I wanna hear like you're trying to get it back.
For the second line, I liked how you approached the line up until the "your... escapades." I want that line to be exaggerated a small bit. Also, Yu's last name is pronounced Na-roo-kaw-mee, for reference.
On the third line, I want you to elongate the ellipses there as well. And really flesh out the line.
hello! I recorded a second one! though I recorded it morning here that's why it has a bit of background noises and i am close from the mic. but worry not, I usually do recording at midnight, should I submit the 2nd take here?
If you would like you could either submit it here or send it to me privately.
i uploaded the updated one. feel free to hear it! ^^