P4GR: Central Cast
Mytholo23 for Ryotaro Dojima
Having lost his wife years prior to the events of Persona 4 thanks to a hit and run, Ryotaro Dojima is a distraught man who tries his best to support his daughter despite the ill schedule to be with her. He begins as a man who struggles to conversate with others but ends as a better man because of the support he allowed his family to give him.
Here is a reference to the original voice actor's performance, original takes are always welcome.
(5) Persona 4 Arena Ultimax - Ryotaro Dojima Voice Clips {ENG DUB} - YouTube
"'When is always', huh...?"
"Ah- Well. Nanako isn't afraid of me. She's just like her mother."
"This town is my town. It's the place where you and Nanako live. That's why I'm gonna live on, protecting this place. As a detective... As a father."
I can see the inspiration you've drawn, and with a closer impression of the character, it would fit Dojima rather well. However, you speak so low to the point where your words are very slurred. While also your voice is very high-pitched for a character like Dojima. I'd probably encourage you to try a different role. Which, I plan to have the Social Link character Casting Call up soon if you would like to take a look and see if any of those characters can fit your voice better.
Thank you very much for the feedback!!!
I'll keep an eye out for that second Casting Call!!!