Catching up with some quick feedbacks before Week 5's review! Great job identifying the target at the start~! The way you introduced both the target and the story's protagonist at the same time was super smart and fun. Love that addition to the script. You have a solid level of energy, and it combines very well with your projection and articulation. I have no complaints from this read! Your pacing sounded fine to me, keep it up going forward! ~Joe