Last Day (Animation)
Claude Xavier for Kendrick
- Free-spirited, likes rapping, comes up with most of the pranks/ideas.
(Line 1)
*Teasing* Bruh you capping. With that busted ass iPhone?
(Line 2)
Ms. Winslet, we just forgot our books in the library, I promise we'll be quick.
(Line 3)
He needs to hurry up, he plays too much. On my momma, he does this every time.
(Line 4)
Pause, when you say the whole summer...Like the "whole" summer?
(Line 5)
How...How does a big ass statue just vanish? It was right here. Bro, what are we going to do? We have 2 hours left to find it. I'm not trying to spend the summer working.
(Line 6)
Demarius, shut up! We get it! It's our fault, and you had nothing to do with it. But you're making it worst with your nagging! *Impersonating* I'm Demarius, and it's all your fault. It's all your fault. *Sigh* Maybe if you help instead of flirting with Sharice every 5 seconds, we could find it.
(Line 7)
*Annoyed* You're about to catch these hands bruh. Keegan, Shane. Ya'll better get his ass.
Hello Claude, Your take on Kendrick was interesting. Very energetic. There are moments your voice cracks a bit. That typically happens when performing in a higher voice. Make sure to relax your throat, direct your sound to the front of the face (nasal region), and engage your core to support the sound. (Lean into the sound rather than push from the throat). It sounds like you're straining at times and this will help give you a fuller sound while performing higher voices. The "Last Day" is an animation, but the performance was a little too cartoonish. From your introduction, you have a nice voice. You should audition as Kendrick from that. You'll be surprised what you could do. You still can perform with a higher voice; just make sure you support the sound and you're not taking it into a cartoonish place. Thank you for auditioning.
I appreciate the feedback! I will submit another take!