Last Day (Animation)
Getsumei Marson for Keegan
Keegan is awkward but confident. He's also a bad liar; so, Ms. Winslet and Principal Banks target him for information.
(Line 1)
I saw him talking to Sharice. *Laugh* He’s trying to get them cookies.
(Line 2)
Is that statue heavy? I'm not trying to hurt my back. You know I have an "F-ed" up back.
(Line 3)
*Nervously* Going, Ah...going...We're going to the library. Like Kendrick said.
(Line 4)
I checked by the dugout, and I didn't see it. Also, Demarius said he was going to beat our asses again.
(Line 5)
I'm feeling sick. *Cough* What if my dad finds out? He's going to kill me. *Panicking* I'm bad at lying. You know I'm bad at lying.
(Line 6)
*Worried* Do you think they'll give us more time? My dad can't find out. He's already angry about the car. He has to pay 1000 to get it fixed. Now this...
Hello Marson, Your delivery for Keegan was interesting. It was like shaggy from Scooby Doo, a nervous awkward. You should think peppier. (Especially in lines 1,2 and 4). The nervous and worried lines are a good starting point but add more energy. Remember he's confident and not timid. Good job overall. Thanks for auditioning.