Hi Joseph, I really like your voice, it seems to fit very well for this promo piece. Nice read! Here's where I think you could really improve your delivery... slow down on your delivery and add in some slight pauses for emphasis, like during the information segments ( LEARN ABOUT SCHOLARSHIPS, RESUME WRITING AND MORE!) I like your slight variations in tone as well, I think you could enhance the tonal variations a bit more. Well done. :)

Good work here! Love the radio sound you're getting across. "Trainers, educators, and potential employers" felt a tad rushed--sounds like you're slurring your words a touch. Allow the words to get the space they need. Can still be full of energy and fast paced, but try slowing the general cadence down to each syllable is clear. Mind your distance from your mic while recording... it almost sounded like your head moved toward and away from the mic in a few parts. Fun choice on the "with a free lunch!" line. Sounds like it's a surprise to the listener as much as it was to you! That really caught my ear. Good stuff!

Hey Joseph! You may need to increase your gain settings; I had to nearly max out my volume to listen. You brought some strong energy to this read (I particularly like the "Career Fair" delivery), and with a slightly slower tempo, I think you can strike gold :)