Polaris [An Original Animatic Series] - Pilot
Sam Pike for Terran
Terran (pronounced TEH ruhn) is the Founder and Leader of Polaris. Terran is very skilled at manipulating Earth's gravitational forces through telekinesis, as well as causing mild earthquakes and moving/shifting terrain. Being the most powerful person in Polaris, he takes his duties very seriously. Terran has a very strong and confident presence, though he is also fairly relaxed. He rarely gets angry or upset, and has good control over his emotions. However, he is also fairly strict, and does not hesitate to enforce rules.
Terran should have a deep, booming and confident voice. His age is approximately around 50-60. His dialogue in Episode 1 consists of a page-long speech.
[Giving an announcement to an auditorium] Good evening, everyone. I am Terran, the Founder and Leader of the Polaris Summer Training Program. It is my honor to welcome the new generation of Specials into our home.
[Giving an announcement to an auditorium] We expect you to be on your absolute best behavior when you are here with us, and even more so when you return home. If you disobey the rules, there will be some... unwanted repercussions.
I think your voice for him is great, and your audio quality is amazing! If you would like to do a retake, however, I would suggest slowing down your pace just slightly and sounding a bit more monotone. While I absolutely love the liveliness, Terran is very calm and reserved, yet confident. Take Dumbledore's speech from Harry Potter, as an example! - Side note, if you are interested, I would love to hear an audition for male extras. There are a few characters who appear in Episode 1 once or twice that I think your voice would fit very well.
Thank you for the critique! I’ll give it another shot sometime soon