Fallout: New Vegas - Come Wander with Me (Quest Mod)
Piper1 for Miller
The captain of the guards for Kinkade's Estate. He's an angry man who doesn't really like people making his job difficult, or making him do anything at all besides sit around all day. Unlike most of the other employees however, he gets along with the kinkade family.
Where do you think you're going? Mr. Kinkade ain't looking to make any new friends.
Fine, I'll let you through, but I'm going to have to search you first. No weapons on the property.
Next time you think you're hot shit, come see me when I'm off shift. Then we'll see who the top dog is.
I think it's pretty good, but my only issue is that the second line almost sounds a little too ... Hmm. Well, I'm not really sure how to put this? Nasally? Almost sounds like he's mimicking something back to someone like a child would use as a taunt. That's not a huge issue for me, but that's something I noticed. Other than that, I think the rest is pretty good. Nice work!
Would you like me to redo it? I was trying to have him sound "Mocking" in the second line.