"Payback [working title]" Comedy Pitch Demo
Dan for Heather
Heather is a young student at UCLA who works part-time as a production assistant for a popular local radio station. Amiable and fun-loving, Heather is a reliable worker who has a mischievous streak. Over the course of the story Heather learns that she has a flair for on-air performance ... and a flair for pranks.
[excited, eager]
Do you really think I can do it?
(laughs)
Oh, it sounds too good!
[nervous as her crush is teasing her]
"I mean ..."
(laughs nervously, enjoying the attention from her crush)
[playful, clearly enjoying the situation]
"Why are you being so mean to me?"
(suddenly remembers the pranks she played on Michael)
"Well, yeah, I did do that."
[playfully teasing]
"C'mon, Michael."
(can't stop herself from laughing)
[playfully teasing Michael in different ways]
"Michael, Michael, Michael." (repeat many times, using your voice to say the lines in different creative ways)