Great job! This is not an easy script, but your performance was nice. I would recommend practicing this one a lot to really hone your "r" and "w" sounds, as while your read was articulate, the "weird rare race" segments were definitely tricky for you. You still handled it well, though, keep working at it as much as you can! I like the tone, I would just recommend adding more energy and projection. Overall, great job, keep it up!