Great job taking on the challenge! Also, I appreciate you including the description at the beginning, it set up your performance very well. The more detailed you are the better. Right from the start, I could tell you knew exactly what you were doing with your energy! It feels compelling from start to finish. Your pronunciations are a bit off when it comes to the locations, but that's not a big deal at all. Your pacing was just slightly too fast at certain points, particularly at "weird rare race," so keep an eye out for that. Aside from that, solid projection, solid breathing, and solid enunciation! Really well done, this was fantastic!