I really enjoyed listening to the funny voice. Really good keep at it.

I love hearing something different! This was great. You definitely caught my attention! I was worried your articulation would be off because of the goofy voice, but honestly you didn't have this problem at all. Solid job! I do think, maybe because of the pacing and your voice, that the read itself felt a bit stale. There weren't any moments where I felt the story became "exciting" in your emotion or tone. Keep the voice, but try to combine it with an increasing level of excitement, or try adding emphasis to certain words to achieve that same goal. Experiment with that and find what works for you. Overall, I loved it. Nice job!