Nice audition! I think the emotion was there, but was delivered in a different way then the lines were meant to. For the first, I would encourage you to try saying it a little slower as he is trying to be charming and flirty to a beautiful girl he just met. For the second, I think as well slowing it down a little to help it flow more smoother and not seemed rushed. As for the third, try to put the emphasis on the words that are written in upper case. The context is Maria yelled that he thinks she and her other sister are ugly since Gwen was called ugly earlier. I think with that emphasis it would really change the meaning and be delivered the way it was meant to be! Good luck to you!