I like this a lot! One thing about it though is the beginning seemed to show off the energy and charisma I'm looking for but then towards the middle it gets lost and then the end it picks back up again. If you can keep that same Charismatic Energy and attitude throughout I think you have a great shot at this role
I'm glad you liked it! And yeah, I was coming down with a migraine at the time and didn't notice, so I was getting tongue-tied and kept having to redo the middle, so admittedly it came out a bit flat in the final take. If you or the director wants (assuming you guys are working together on this) I can do a retake to prove I can maintain it.
Let's hear it!