(Looking for powerful female/male voice) Skyrim quest mod: Shezarrine 2022 First Wave
Rhys Normington for NPC writer
We're looking for creative writers who have played Skyrim before and love creating unique, funny NPCs, who would breathe life into our mod. The NPCs will populate Alinor City, the mod's primary location. Please send us an NPC sample using the provided format and put on Google Doc.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19Iu4wMXndLiVZHSl0sHfEzHZWDiISuawRLeeCYbo0BI/edit?usp=sharing
Please note, the template's sample is very basic and shouldn't be used as a model sample. You should be creative and crazy with your NPCs!
If you are not selected, we promise to not use your NPC without your permission.
Say something you think would fit
Thanks. Is this a reference to Red Dead Redemption 2? Anyway, my feedback:___ 1. Interesting character concept___ 2. Some lines have flavor___ 3. Too many topic lines, he should have 10 lines at most, but you wrote 15___ 4. His background story wasn't clearly communicated_____ Suggestion:___ 1. Expand the conversation "Why are you called Arthur?" into one where he briefly tells his story___ 2. Remove the "You’re quite brutish, has anybody ever told you that?" conversation as it is a bit awkward___(Sorry for the weird formatting, Casting Call Club doesn't allow new line in the comments)
It wasn't a reference to Read Dead 2, more just liked the name. honestly. I've made a few edits and sadly cut the John Wick reference, but what can you do. Hopefully you think it's better.
The conversation flows much better now! I'm surprised it wasn't a reference to Red Dead Redemption 2. Arthur (protagonist of Read Dead Redemption 2) was a thug who extorted people but in the end found redemption in doing good deeds.
I am aware of RD2, I just haven't played all of it. My PC isn't good enough to run it well. Glad you think it has improved, any other suggestions?