Project C13 - Original animatic storyboard
theshadowhatter for Mack
Mack's a good guy, but he's got edge. He's always light-hearted and easy-going.
He speaks confidently and as though he's amused by everything going on around him.
You aren't from around here, are you kid?
There's a bunch of signs pointing the way.
(to himself)
Assuming they haven't been destroyed by bandits...
(to Cyn)
Oh yeah! Watch out for bandits!
Hold on. I'm going, I'm going. Relax. I can be a little dense sometimes, but not enough to pick a fight with someone who can throw a lumbering oaf across the room like it's nothing — which, by the way, was hot as hell!
saw my notifications and was told I wasn't picked for the role. wish the project page would reflect that too since I wanted to know if somebody got cast or not. either way I was posting a comment here to see if there's any constructive feedback I can get from my audition such as anything that needed to be improved, or if it just wasn't your cup of tea. either way thanks for listening and giving me a shot.
Hey, thanks a bunch for taking the time to try out. Neither the audio quality nor the take on the character were my cup of tea. Your version of Mack conveys his light-heart good guy side, but is void of the "edge" and confidence that's essential to this character. If you go through the auditions that were not rejected, you should get a good idea what I'm talking about. Though I like your voice, I think your acting needs work; to me it sounded more like you enthusiastically reading to yourself than talking to another person. You might find it helpful to envision another person while performing. Best of luck, and thanks again for auditioning!
No problem and thanks for the feedback I'll def keep it in mind with my future auditions. Thanks a ton!