Your voice is very clear and your enunciation is fairly crisp. Good tempo without being rushed. Background was clean. Where can I get my free keychain/garden hose?

Really solid take! I like how you emphasized the slower pacing. This really brought out your articulation, it sounded clear from start to finish! And when I say "slow," I don't even mean that; usually when I hear this script performed it's way too fast, so in comparison this is a really welcome "change of pace." The only main thing I would recommend is to bring just a bit more energy to the character. The sales pitch is there, but I want to feel the passion behind that voice. Aside from that, no complaints! Well done.

wow, very smooth voice!